Kennardo, all the bad stuff about this horrible situation aside, I'm gonna suggest you should ask for a helper or take more time with your articles. There are repetitive words I don't think you truly want in the first couple of paragraphs. Important topics like this, I know you want to present your very best. Like she "shared spoke" about her situation and "she walked away form" instead of from the table. I can tell you were working on it, I do the same thing, it is similar with me.